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Author: Blargian

docs/cloud/features/06_security/02_cloud-access-management/cloud-access-management.md

@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ import user_grant_permissions_options from '@site/static/images/cloud/security/c
 
 # Access control in ClickHouse Cloud {#access-control-in-clickhouse-cloud}
 
-ClickHouse controls user access in two places, via the console and via the database.
-Console access is managed via the clickhouse.cloud user interface. Database access is managed via database user accounts and roles.
-Additionally, console users can be granted roles within the database that enable the console user to interact with the database via our SQL console.
+ClickHouse Cloud controls access to the console itself and the features available within it.
+A **console user** is the foundation of this access with all permissions, roles, and access controls assigned to and managed through these users.
+When [database-level permissions are associated with console users](/cloud/security/common-access-management-queries#modifying-users-and-roles), those then govern their data access when querying via the SQL console.
 
 ## Console users and roles {#console-users-and-roles}
 

docs/cloud/features/06_security/02_cloud-access-management/cloud-authentication.md

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ If your company uses Google Workspace or Microsoft 365, you can leverage your cu
 ## Multi-factor authentication {#multi-factor-authentication}
 
 Users with email + password or social authentication can further secure their account using multi-factor authentication (MFA). To set up MFA:
-1. Log into console.clickhouse.cloud
+1. Log into [console.clickhouse.cloud](https://console.clickhouse.cloud/)
 2. Click your initials in the upper left corner next to the ClickHouse logo
 3. Select Profile
 4. Select Security on the left

docs/cloud/guides/SQL_console/configure_org_and_service_role_assignments.md

@@ -14,6 +14,10 @@ import step_5 from '@site/static/images/cloud/guides/sql_console/org_level_acces
 import step_6 from '@site/static/images/cloud/guides/sql_console/org_level_access/6_org_settings.png'
 import step_7 from '@site/static/images/cloud/guides/sql_console/org_level_access/7_org_settings.png'
 
+# Configuring organization and service role assignments within the console
+
+> This guide shows you how to configure role assignments at the organization and service level.
+
 <VerticalStepper>
 
 ## Access organization settings {#access-service-settings}
@@ -41,7 +45,7 @@ A tab will display on the right hand side of the page:
 
 <Image img={step_5} size="lg"/>
 
-Select the drop-down menu items to adjust the organization role of the selected user.
+Select the drop-down menu items to adjust console-wide access permissions and which features a user can access from within the ClickHouse console.
 This manages high-level access and administrative settings for an organization:
 
 | Role        | Description                                                                      |

docs/cloud/guides/SQL_console/configure_sql_console_role_assignments.md

@@ -14,6 +14,12 @@ import step_5 from '@site/static/images/cloud/guides/sql_console/service_level_a
 import step_6 from '@site/static/images/cloud/guides/sql_console/service_level_access/6_service_settings.png'
 import step_7 from '@site/static/images/cloud/guides/sql_console/service_level_access/7_service_settings.png'
 
+# Configuring SQL console role assignments
+
+> This guide shows you how to configure SQL console role assignments, which
+determine console-wide access permissions and the features that a user can
+access within Cloud console.
+
 <VerticalStepper>
 
 ## Access service settings {#access-service-settings}