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Author: jordan-smith721

source/fundamentals/odata.txt

@@ -118,9 +118,9 @@ Tutorial
 
       This code performs the following actions:
 
-      - Instantiates a new ``MongoClient`` and passes it to the controller
+      - Instantiates a new ``MongoClient`` and passes it to the controller.
       - Defines the Entity Data Model (EDM) and registers ``Restaurants`` as an
-        entity set with the key, ``Id``.
+        entity set with the key ``Id``.
       - Adds the OData service and enables the ``Select()`` query capability.
       - Registers the route by using the ``AddRouteComponents()`` method.
       - Calls the ``UseRouting()`` and ``MapControllers()`` methods to match
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ Tutorial
          info: Microsoft.Hosting.Lifetime[0]
                Hosting environment: Development
          info: Microsoft.Hosting.Lifetime[0]
-               Content root path: /Users/jordan.smith/Documents/mongo/ODataTest/ODataTest
+               Content root path: <Path to your project>
 
       .. tip::
 
@@ -190,9 +190,9 @@ Tutorial
                  ...
                ]
              },
-             
+
              ...
-             
+
              ]
          }
 

source/includes/fundamentals/code-examples/connection/OData.cs

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ public RestaurantsController(IMongoClient client)
             .AsQueryable();
     }
 
-    // Register Get endpoint and set max documents to 5
+    // Registers Get endpoint and sets max documents to 5
     [MongoEnableQuery(PageSize = 5)]
     public ActionResult<IEnumerable<Restaurant>> Get()
     {
@@ -36,22 +36,22 @@ public ActionResult<IEnumerable<Restaurant>> Get()
 
 var builder = WebApplication.CreateBuilder(args);
 
-// Register a convention pack to convert fields to camel case
+// Registers a convention pack to convert fields to camel case
 var camelCaseConvention = new ConventionPack {
         new CamelCaseElementNameConvention()
     };
 ConventionRegistry.Register(
     "CamelCase", camelCaseConvention, type => true);
 
 builder.Services.AddSingleton<IMongoClient>(
-    new MongoClient("Your connection URI"));
+    new MongoClient("<Your connection URI>"));
 
-// Register the Restaurants entity and set the Id field as the key
+// Registers the Restaurants entity and sets the Id field as the key
 var modelBuilder = new ODataConventionModelBuilder();
 modelBuilder.EntitySet<Restaurant>("Restaurants");
 modelBuilder.EntityType<Restaurant>().HasKey(r => r.Id);
 
-// Add OData and specify query capabilities
+// Adds OData and specify query capabilities
 builder.Services.AddControllers().AddOData(
     options => options.Select()
         .AddRouteComponents("odata", modelBuilder.GetEdmModel())