FP tech review2

Author: rustagir

source/fundamentals/serialization/poco.txt

@@ -621,9 +621,10 @@ the following settings:
 - ``Representation``: Set to a ``BsonType`` instance that specifies how
   the ``DateOnly`` value is stored in MongoDB.
 
-- ``DocumentFormat``: Set only if you set the ``Representation``
-  property to ``BsonType.Document``. You can set ``DocumentFormat`` to
-  one of the following ``DateOnlyDocumentFormat`` enum values:
+- ``DocumentFormat``: This option applies only if you set the ``Representation``
+  property to ``BsonType.Document`` and is ignored otherwise. You can
+  set ``DocumentFormat`` to one of the following
+  ``DateOnlyDocumentFormat`` enum values:
 
   - ``DateTimeTicks`` (default): Document contains ``DateTime``
     (``BsonType.DateTime``) and ``Ticks`` (``BsonType.Int64``) fields

source/whats-new.txt

@@ -123,8 +123,8 @@ The 3.2 driver release includes the following new features:
   :ref:`csharp-atlas-vector-search` guide.
 
 - Adds the ``DocumentFormat`` property to the ``DateOnlySerializer``.
-  This property allows you to customize the way that the driver stores
-  ``DateOnly`` values in nested documents. This release also adds the
+  This property allows you to customize the way that the driver serializes
+  ``DateOnly`` values. This release also adds the
   ``[BsonDateOnlyOptions()]`` attribute to customize serialization
   behavior for ``DateOnly`` values at the property level. To learn more,
   see the :ref:`csharp-poco-dateonly-attr` section of the POCOs guide.