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Author: stayseesong

src/connections/destinations/catalog/actions-amazon-conversions-api/index.md

@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ You can include custom attributes with your events to provide additional context
 
 #### How does deduplication work?
 
-Amazon Conversions API uses the `clientDedupeId` field to prevent duplicate events. By default, Segment maps the messageId to this field. For events with the same clientDedupeId, only the latest event will be processed. Please be advised that deduplication occurs across all event types, rather than being limited to individual event types.
+Amazon Conversions API uses the `clientDedupeId` field to prevent duplicate events. By default, Segment maps the messageId to this field. For events with the same clientDedupeId, only the latest event will be processed. Deduplication occurs across all event types, rather than being limited to individual event types.
 
 #### What regions are supported?
 
@@ -170,9 +170,9 @@ After you start sending events, you should see them in your Amazon Advertising d
 - Managed Service (MS) Accounts: No
 - Manager Accounts (MA): At present, this functionality is not available. However, we are actively monitoring market demand and user requirements. Should sufficient interest emerge from our user base, we will evaluate the possibility of implementing this feature in a future release.
 
-#### I am an advertiser on Amazon Demand Side Platform. My agency cannot provide access to their entity as they manage other clients. How do I get access to a specific advertiser account?
+#### I am an advertiser on Amazon Demand Side Platform. My agency can't provide access to their entity as they manage other clients. How do I get access to a specific advertiser account?
 
 - **Option 1**: 
-  1. Please request your agency to grant access to the specific advertiser account intended for campaign execution. Specifically, 'View and Edit' permissions must be assigned for Events Manager. Please see help article [here](https://advertising.amazon.com/help/G3ZZ6ZXQWG34DPPM){:target="_blank"}. 
-  2. Utilize the Amazon Conversions API (CAPI) to transmit data to the advertiser account for which access was granted in the previous step.
-- **Option 2**: [Not a supported pattern via Segment yet] Please upload your data directly to the Manager Account, where it will be visible in Ads Data Manager. Once uploaded, you can efficiently share this data with other advertiser accounts that are linked to your Manager Account. Learn more [here](https://advertising.amazon.com/API/docs/en-us/adm/1_ads-data-manager-console-overview){:target="_blank"}.
+      1. Request your agency to grant access to the specific advertiser account intended for campaign execution. Specifically, **View and Edit** permissions must be assigned for the Events Manager. Please see the [help article](https://advertising.amazon.com/help/G3ZZ6ZXQWG34DPPM){:target="_blank"}. 
+      2. Utilize the Amazon Conversions API (CAPI) to transmit data to the advertiser account for which access was granted in the previous step.
+- **Option 2**: (*This is not a supported pattern using Segment*) Upload your data directly to the Manager Account where it will be visible in the Ads Data Manager. After it's uploaded, you can share this data with other advertiser accounts that are linked to your Manager Account. Learn more [here](https://advertising.amazon.com/API/docs/en-us/adm/1_ads-data-manager-console-overview){:target="_blank"}.