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Proposed rewrite to "Creating Microsoft Azure Virtual Machines for NGINX Open Source and F5 NGINX Plus" #608
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Hi @ADubhlaoich 👋 Thank you for your thoughtful suggestions! I’ve committed all the changes and will closely review the rest of the file to catch any similar issues. Really appreciate your patience as I get up to speed (Whew!). Your feedback has been incredibly helpful. Please let me know if you spot anything else. Thank you so much once again. :) |
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Co-authored-by: Jon Torre <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Jon Torre <[email protected]>
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I have accepted all of the proposed edit suggestions for this PR. I am working on a separate PR which targets this one to address content and style changes, as it has been inactive for many months. |
NOTE: this is a rewrite only. No technical changes.
The original documentation was slightly difficult to read and follow. It had complex sentences and paragraphs that scored 14 on the Hemmingway app. Some constructs were conflicting or confusing, which took longer to understand.
I improved the document’s readability and clarity, making it accessible to a wider, non-expert audience. Here’s how:
Testing: I used the Hemmingway app to confirm readability and studied the terms individually to ensure they were all updated.
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