[coc-incident-resolution-ombuds][editorial] Reorder text for better understandability #337
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…ragraphs for readability. This commit reorders some sentences/paragraphs to improve the flow of topics and help people notice how things fit together. Specifically, it * Moves the sentence about possible suspension from W3C from the introduction to the paragraph about resolutions, clarifying that this is a possible outcome in parallel and in contrast to apologies etc. * Moves the “All situations are different.. use whichever method” sentence to the end of the section, after the methods have been outlined, so that it's clearer what we're talking about. * Shifts the list of “Everyone .. is expected to” bullet list from the intro into the incident resolution procedures, since it is a key part of how to enact those procedures, and helps clarify expectations for the content that follows. No words were changed, added, or removed in this PR. Only moved.
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@fantasai this document has been heavily revised in conversation with our new ombuds organization. I apologize for the delayed response. Wendy or I will post the revised information today or tomorrow. |
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This commit reorders some sentences/paragraphs to improve the flow of topics and help people notice how things fit together. Specifically, it
Moves the sentence about possible suspension from W3C from the introduction to the paragraph about resolutions, clarifying that this is a possible outcome in parallel and in contrast to apologies, editing minutes, etc.
Moves the “All situations are different.. use whichever method” sentence to after the methods have been outlined, so that it's clearer what we're talking about.
Shifts the list of “Everyone .. is expected to” bullet list from the intro into the incident resolution procedures, since it is a key part of how to enact those procedures, and helps clarify expectations for the content that follows.
No words were changed, added, or removed in this PR, only moved.